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fitzcaraldon
PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:08 am  Reply with quote



Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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an old pencil draw from me:



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Dr Malachi Constant
PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:46 pm  Reply with quote
Awaiting a Nifty Title


Joined: 25 Jun 2006
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Location: There... WOLF!!

Hey - that's pretty fuckin' good. Well done, dude.
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fitzcaraldon
PostPosted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:33 am  Reply with quote



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thanx man!

even now i have actually designed two tee designs based on this draw and submitted em on this threadless site(you maybe might know). see how it will turns out... if you wanna see, a link to it: http://www.threadless.com/profile/1189276/Vilez/critiques

donīt wonder if my english is not perfect. i am from germany(yes, i know thatīs not a proper apology).
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Desdinova
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:30 am  Reply with quote



Joined: 21 Jun 2006
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Location: Wichita, KS

The good:
Fantastic piece. Keep at it. From the scan, I thought it was pen and ink at first. You've got a nice balance between realism and abstraction here. Although I'd love to see where you go if you favor abstraction more.

The bad:
Your composition could be improved. (You've got a dead spot of white space on the left hand side.) And there could be more separation between the crow and the tree branches. As it is, it looks like branches are growing out of the crow's back.

Overall:
Despite it's drawbacks, it's a great piece and easily marketable. Nice job.
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fitzcaraldon
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:10 am  Reply with quote



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thanx desdinova. yes, the branches fits not at all. so, i cut em away for the tee designs.

if you like i could from time to time more stuff here. but could last some time.
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Desdinova
PostPosted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:08 am  Reply with quote



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fitzcaraldon wrote:
thanx desdinova. yes, the branches fits not at all. so, i cut em away for the tee designs.

if you like i could from time to time more stuff here. but could last some time.


That's what this thread is for: Display of user artwork with feedback from everybody. Post away !
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fitzcaraldon
PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:31 am  Reply with quote



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here is the final tee design:






and link:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/261007/crowhead
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