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Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:08 am
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an old pencil draw from me:
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Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:46 pm
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Awaiting a Nifty Title
Joined: 25 Jun 2006
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Location: There... WOLF!!
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| Hey - that's pretty fuckin' good. Well done, dude. |
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Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:33 am
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thanx man!
even now i have actually designed two tee designs based on this draw and submitted em on this threadless site(you maybe might know). see how it will turns out... if you wanna see, a link to it: http://www.threadless.com/profile/1189276/Vilez/critiques
donīt wonder if my english is not perfect. i am from germany(yes, i know thatīs not a proper apology). |
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Sun Mar 07, 2010 5:30 am
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Joined: 21 Jun 2006
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Location: Wichita, KS
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The good:
Fantastic piece. Keep at it. From the scan, I thought it was pen and ink at first. You've got a nice balance between realism and abstraction here. Although I'd love to see where you go if you favor abstraction more.
The bad:
Your composition could be improved. (You've got a dead spot of white space on the left hand side.) And there could be more separation between the crow and the tree branches. As it is, it looks like branches are growing out of the crow's back.
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Despite it's drawbacks, it's a great piece and easily marketable. Nice job. |
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Sun Mar 07, 2010 9:10 am
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thanx desdinova. yes, the branches fits not at all. so, i cut em away for the tee designs.
if you like i could from time to time more stuff here. but could last some time. |
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 6:08 am
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| fitzcaraldon wrote: | thanx desdinova. yes, the branches fits not at all. so, i cut em away for the tee designs.
if you like i could from time to time more stuff here. but could last some time. |
That's what this thread is for: Display of user artwork with feedback from everybody. Post away ! |
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Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:31 am
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