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| Forums Index -> Best-cellars -> A Tale of Suffering: ANTHOLOGY: some what explicit! |
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Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:16 am
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| Uncle Creepy wrote: | | TsMkLg068426 wrote: |
Is it to much to ask if you can make the story better? maybe correct some of the terrible grammer and the hard nipple shit even though thats what everyone iikes from the story. also the rave track for the rave scene thinking really hard for which one would be perfect at the moment..... |
No dude, we need to keep it as is. It's those things that make it as special and it really is special. Those are the things that we love. You've inadvertantly written one of the absolute funniest things any of us have ever read. Seriously, it's genius as is. Don;t worry man, this is gonna be classic! |
Yeah when you say funny you mean I am an idiot, not in a good funny way. |
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:59 pm
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| Dude, seriously, in a brilliant way! |
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Mon Nov 19, 2007 9:54 pm
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| So TsMkLg...do you like Tiffany Shepis? |
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Tue Dec 04, 2007 6:40 am
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| Sirand wrote: | | So TsMkLg...do you like Tiffany Shepis? |
She is hot LOL!    |
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:27 pm
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Fri Jun 27, 2008 5:24 pm
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IM SO FUCKING READY!!!
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Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:39 am
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here is a bit of a tease:
| Quote: | A TALE OF SUFFERING: THE MYSTERY
It could not be said how it all happened, how it began and why. There is more than you can think off. The mysteries that will unfold the truth about what really happened to those people who died. Now we will finally know how far anyone will go so no one will know the truth.
It was a rainy night, my parents were out for a school meeting, and while they were gone I was watching the movie Hellraiser. Just as I was getting ready to watch the movie I got a phone call. I picked up the phone and it was my mom “David do not forget to wash the dishes before I come Home,” me annoyed and wasting my time I told her they are already cleaned up and than hung up the phone. Finally I got back on the couch and pushed play on my DVD player remote. Half way thru the movie the power goes out and could not see anything in the dark.
I finally got up from couch, looking for the flashlight and remembered it was in the kitchen. The rain started to pour even harder there was also thunder and lightning. If things could not get any worse, I was really having a hard time seeing and finding the flashlight. While I was at the kitchen and near the sink where there is a window and all of a sudden there was a huge flash of lightning and I saw something weird happening at my neighbors.
My neighbor was one of my classmates his name was Manny. I hated that asshole. He was fucking my Girlfriend Jen. She kept on tell me that nothing was happening between them. Now that did not matter, again there was a flash of lightning and I saw blood splatter on my neighbors window, it made me jump back and fall in the dark.
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Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:39 am
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Oh shit. It's on now!
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Can you feel the thirst?
I'll see you on the other side . . . 
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:33 pm
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:41 pm
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:52 pm
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Continue.
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Fri Jul 04, 2008 5:13 am
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| SWEET JESUS BE PRAISED!!!! |
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Tue Aug 26, 2008 2:39 pm
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| So Manny was layin' pipe on Jen. I didn't know that. More... |
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Mon Sep 22, 2008 5:22 pm
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| American Werewolf wrote: | | So Manny was layin' pipe on Jen. I didn't know that. More... |
She learned her lesson at END! |
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Thu Sep 25, 2008 5:30 am
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| The WAIT....FOR SOME MORE SUFFERING..... |
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